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I’m speaking at the 35th annual Southeastern Writers Association conference in beautiful St. Simons Island, Ga., this week and taking copious notes at the sessions. Although I can’t go to all the faboo classes, I’m sharing some tips from some of those I’m lucky enough to attend.
Here is what historical fiction author and James River Writers co-founder David L. Robbins* had to say about plotting and outlining.
- Think of a successful book as a home run.
- In baseball, in order to hit a home run, certain things have to happen, or it’s not a home run: player has to hit the ball and run all the bases.
- Main characters need to run the bases of their stories—and they each do it in different ways.
- Design a specific character that will run the bases—and then, run alongside him. Record how he does it.
- You might only have four bases; you might have 40. But let those be the only parameters, rather than outlining.
IT’S ALL ABOUT CONTROL
- Don’t write 900,000 words.
- Physically control as little as you can, and let the rest have a certain autonomy.
- However, don’t let your character keep running into right field; control him. Get him to second.
- The Juggler
- With several items in the air, it looks like chaos.
- The juggler only has two things in his hand at a time; yet, he still controls six or seven in the air. He knows the orbit and the momentum.
- Books we love demonstrate this: The reader loves the sense of chaos, but that’s because the writer has absolute control.
RECOLLECTIVE VS. RECORDATIVE WRITING
- Recordative: Run the bases with your characters & record what they do. There’s an immediacy to your imagery when you’re recording something.
- Recollective: If you use passive verbs, there’s a detachment. If you’ve outlined too much, you’re remembering what the character did, rather than experiencing what he did—and the reader will be detached.
- Don’t do it! When you outline, you’re following a recollection when you go to write.
- He’s a fan of pivot points (the “bases”).
- Outlines hobble or hamper characters. Let the characters surprise you.
- An outline makes them run to first base a month before your character actually gets there.
- Know generally where the book ends, and figure you’ll get there—be in the moment.
- It’s insecure writing if you need to outline too much.
ON BEING AN ARTIST
- Manet didn’t decide where to put a brush stroke; he just did it. Have your brushstrokes.
- Set out the pivot points (bases) and trust yourself as an artist.
- What’s in the character’s head, heart, & how he’s going to get there is all brushstroke for him.